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Thursday, July 25, 2013

Post-Bourdieu: Ontologically Distinct Forms of Class in Contemporary Society

A University of Melbourne Essay Assignment

Under the 3rd-Year Sociology subject "Contemporary Social Theory"

Passed with High Distinction (H1)
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By Benjamin L., written during Semester 1, 2013

Tutor's comments (E. Sayes):
This is an ambitious essay, that is wide ranging. You have a clear argument that you attempt to advance. I'm not convinced by it in the end, I must say. You seem to be quick to discard Bourdieu, for reasons that I'm not sure I understand. The note you finish on would seem to be the best place to start: what role does cultural capital/habitus play in those contexts. I would have liked a greater engagement at the level of theory. It's fine being very critical, but you need to clearly explain why. Overall a good essay.

Social Differentiation & Inequalities in Education

A University of Melbourne Essay Assignment

Under the 3rd-Year Sociology subject "Social Differences & Inequalities"

Passed with High Distinction (H1)
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By Benjamin L., written during Semester 1, 2013

Tutor's comments (J. Flores):
Ben, you have achieved a very high H1 on this paper. It is admirable to see such dedication and critical analytical skills in a third year paper. Such research is promising for honours work - keep up the good work! Consider whether it would have been best to focus on either race or sexuality, not both. It could have resulted in a deeper analysis? There are some irregularities in your style of referencing. Very well done!