A University of Melbourne Essay Assignment
Under the 3rd-Year Sociology subject "Contemporary Social Theory"
Passed with High Distinction (H1)
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By Benjamin L., written during Semester 1, 2013
Tutor's comments (E. Sayes):
This is an ambitious essay, that is wide ranging. You have a clear argument that you attempt to advance. I'm not convinced by it in the end, I must say. You seem to be quick to discard Bourdieu, for reasons that I'm not sure I understand. The note you finish on would seem to be the best place to start: what role does cultural capital/habitus play in those contexts. I would have liked a greater engagement at the level of theory. It's fine being very critical, but you need to clearly explain why. Overall a good essay.